Curiosity, Confidence & Co-operation (NHSB WAY)

Thursday, January 13, 2011

Class Brain Storming Lesson for Term 1 - Compo 1

Dear 4A,

We had discussed about the various ways to begin or end this composition.
I would like you to make use of 1 strategy.
Do include words and phrases from the list as well.
Underline them in your compo....tick the words you have used in the list to avoid reusing them too much.

Starting the story with the ENDING

Tim snuggled up to my feet. He wanted to rest. I continued to stroke his fur. Yes, he needed a good rest. Tim, my pet dog and I had a really long and challenging day!

Starting the story with a FLASHBACK

Everyone left the pet cemetery. I shed my last tear for Tim. I knelt down and placed a carnation on his grave. Here lies my loyal friend, my pet dog, Tim. I stood there staring at the grave as I recalled that fateful day.

Starting the story with a DIALOUGE

“Here boy…”, I whistled to Tim. My faithful companion raced swiftly to me, wagging his curly tail in obedience. “Mum, I am taking Tim for a walk in the park”, I called out to my mother as I put the leash on my pet dog.

2 comments:

  1. Dear 4A,
    You have done a great job with your compositions.....thanks!

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  2. Really? How much did I got?

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